11 comments on “BooHoo!

  1. Wow! Oh wow! Didn kno u cld write like dis…dat glass and oh! D transition of a child’s face…dats a moment dat always intrigues me as the face shifts from one emotion to another.
    Sweetie u rock jare..Rock ON!!

  2. Captain,

    You’ve always been one hell of a wordsmith. Little wonder, I stalked out your facebook notes and poetry since back in the day. This is brilliant, short and a ‘tale’ well told. Crying over spilt milk never seemed so artistic. Weldone.

    Why were each paragraphs started with lowercases tho? Personal signage?

    • Yo Kelvin thanks a milli man. That’s true tho’ I should get my fb posts and put them here too eh? That’s not plagiarism now is it? LOL!
      About the Lowercase paragraph starters. Well errr…yea, personal signage! (Pronounced “laziness”)

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